Talk:Tori Fixes Beck and Jade/@comment-5406287-20120813214628/@comment-5413842-20120816194554

I don't know. After reading the script...I don't think it was Dan. I thought that was just a major fan who knows the characters so well that they can make dialogue that genuinely sounds like something the characters would say, but I only found that in Tori, Andre, Sinjin, and a little of Beck. The Jandre seemed a little out of nowhere (it's been a longtime since JGC) and the Bade was a little...weird. But then again, "Cheddar" only gave bits of the script.

The subplot was very, very, vague. If "Cheddar" gave you what an actual script looks like (font Courier New, size 12, dialogue in the middle, actions, etc.), is there anyway you could show us. Dan would give the scene and the setting, so did he do that? Because on here it was really confusing (to me at least). What were Cat & Robbie doing, what was Mrs. Harris so excited about, and why was Trina there?

But for the explanations before you (Sophia Loca) gave the script, it kind of seems like it was Dan...

-Cheddar sounds like a funny name Dan would make.

-Those clues between Twitter & Tinychat...logging off, coming back, deleting tweets...