Talk:Cabbie/@comment-5206572-20120809222126/@comment-5549589-20120810024025

Ok I read it a 2nd time and if I may give a little constructive criticism, I thought the whole part where Robbie threatens Evan seemed a little out of Robbie's character. Robbie doesn't strike me as the type who could possibly get hostile or violent. Unless you could say that Robbie's love for Cat is so strong that maybe it gives him more of a courage to want to defend or protect her. Maybe that's what you were aiming for? I promise I'm not knocking or slamming it. I still really liked it. Especially doing it from Evan's POV and looking at him in a positive light which i thought was brilliant.