Talk:Cabbie/@comment-5360902-20120808022541/@comment-5206572-20120808152408

It's a nice concept and I think you got them fairly in character. I also loved the Jimmy bit. However, your grammar wasn't the greatest (nowhere near the worst, though. I've seen some things that've made me feel like my eyes are bleeding.), so some editing might be best. All in all, I think you should continue it.